ext_1664 ([identity profile] teddibear.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] so_out_of_ideas 2007-01-02 04:00 am (UTC)

Hee! You know I love these both :) And yes, sequels! *smooch*

First fic has an error I missed-Once he was directly outside the Jaffa's door and let out a sigh. the AND should be HE :)

And hee, I love the title of the second one *g* I think you need to write that convo between Sam and Vala. :) And you know, this could slot into the Believe AU. I don't remember, did he actually express his love for her in Taking the Long Way? Also I think we need a fic where Sam reams Daniel out for his treatment of Vala in Company of Thieves and that's what prompts this confession of Daniel's. Cuz while he's smart enuf to realize how much of an ass he was on his own, I think it's more poignant if Sam points it out to him showing him others noticed his ill-conceived behavior as well. Or maybe Cam. Sam can console Vala and Cam can kick Daniel's butt. :)

Just some more ideas which you really don't need *snerk* *smooch*

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