The line you used for the summary gave me shivers! The rest was lovely too. :D I like the parallel you found between Vala's and Sha're's pregnancies (I missed Sha're's pregnancy arc, but I'e been reading up at the Stargatewiki).

It's funny, we wrote our latest fics around the same time, and I covered Vala's history while you covered Daniel's -- it's almost like they're unconscious counterparts, LOL!