You are so adorable *g* And no you still missed mouthful ON sand (it's mouthful OF sand)
And the errant it's is here: The diner was still buzzing with the noise of it's lunch crowd It's should be ITS. :) Possesive not contraction :)
And oh you are so cute. And ooh three more. But yes I want them to sleep on the beach and AU is fine, I didn't realize the Trust's warehouses were all over the country (have to wonder exactly how long it took SG-1 to get to the police station then, I mean they drove, so it couldn't have been TOO far that's what I was getting at.)
Geography sucks. *snerk*
And you found the other errors. Now how does a Farscape vid inspire Daniel/Vala exactly?
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And the errant it's is here: The diner was still buzzing with the noise of it's lunch crowd It's should be ITS. :) Possesive not contraction :)
And oh you are so cute. And ooh three more. But yes I want them to sleep on the beach and AU is fine, I didn't realize the Trust's warehouses were all over the country (have to wonder exactly how long it took SG-1 to get to the police station then, I mean they drove, so it couldn't have been TOO far that's what I was getting at.)
Geography sucks. *snerk*
And you found the other errors. Now how does a Farscape vid inspire Daniel/Vala exactly?
*smooch* I so luff you.